Unwritten Soul


Last Word - Poem by Unwritten Soul

How colorful prism is
The last color we'll see is black
To be ever-last in a long deep sleep
And last sound to be heard is silent
Where all melodies and noises going to rest
We know last thing to own is never gold
But what remain for us is in our own
Heart, the chest for a soul
And the last word to say
Is only a beautiful goodbye
It may hurt ears to hear
But do know
Whatever comes, at last
Silent will replace
And black will cover your face
Just what we stay to perceive later
It could be all...all but remain in heart only
Here now our souls writing life history
Of long years, colorful and melody
That someday may also come in ugly and noisy
But someday be ended in black and stay silently
Heart will endure all before end the world
To be lasting in a very last word
To say, to hear
A beautiful Goodbye
Burying in eternity
Prism color in a long dream

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Every thing start with something
Even a something is a beginning
When it has a beginning it must be ending
End will be last...and it can be everlast


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A random write that chaining word of last,
either it just to be last one (end) or to be last one (forever)

a last thing in order sometime be everlasting in memory...

Comments about Last Word by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (4/26/2014 4:00:00 PM)

    ......a poem of truth and reality...only as far as I know we have never experienced this....so can anyone really know...I hope it is the easiest thing we will ever do....enjoyed this write... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 27 Points Ebi Robert (12/19/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    nice, keep it up....................... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,932 Points Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    The last colour will be black
    The last sound will be silent
    The lasting word will be Good bye
    Everlasting is ending.
    Beautiful write from your pen.
    Loved reading your poems. You always come up with something different. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (11/10/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Right perception has got powerful presentation and the effect is tremendous. A good sharing Soul.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (11/1/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    the starting was so good, , it straight away makes your interest in the poem, , , and so was the rest of the poem, , , amazing work, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/31/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    Yes, the last thing we own is not gold. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/28/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    Well-penned...alpha and omega connection! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,429 Points Amitava Sur (10/27/2013 10:45:00 PM)

    A well thought penning.... anything earthly, once it begins there will be an end.... this is a process.
    well written (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,018 Points Sallam Yassin (10/27/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    ending last
    in words
    of heart
    in every new start
    waiting us
    next door is last
    never last for the soul in the last (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 858 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/27/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    In the womb of color black
    Was born a speck of white
    In the white dispersed we find
    All the colors of natures light.......

    Good poem and welcome to my page too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,576 Points Lyn Paul (10/25/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    Particularly love the last four lines line Soul. Your words are always so caring and sensitive. I read you Poet Page these words too are incredible. Thank You and keep inspiring others (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 461 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (10/25/2013 8:32:00 PM)

    Without the last word, never could last expression of thought exist in a verbal or printed context.
    For in these words of communication forms a genuine connection with all humanity.
    It importance is indeed never given it's dues.
    A beautiful poem with an expression that runs all the way through. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,749 Points Noreen Carden (10/23/2013 8:02:00 PM)

    Hello Soul a beautiful poem well written really lovely well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hathy Tong (10/22/2013 6:18:00 AM)

    I would employ you as my personal poet or something.... I could read this poem forever! Thank you so much for sharing this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    Meaningful write, thought provoking! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,167 Points Susan Lacovara (10/21/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Amazing. Love the descriptive images you paint. Silence often speaks the stories of one's soul....where words fail at times. Beautiful poem....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/21/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    as you say its always sad to say good bye but maybe we can say hello instead of it.we can say hello to a new adventure and new period of our lives even if we are under the dark or in the silence.

    i like this poem.it s short and so meaningful.~nb (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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