Funmbi Aransiola

Rookie - 0 Points (03-09-1987)

Let Me Show You Something - Poem by Funmbi Aransiola

Let me show you what you did to me
The way you stripped me bare of sorrow and hate
The love in your eyes as blue as the sky
The way we float in the air just beneath the sunshine
Way beyond the grey heaven, high as a kite
The way you touch and heal this broken heart
Putting the pieces together, making me whole again
The way you lay your eyes on me and sing my praise
The way you touch me and chase my blues away
Come here and let me show you what you did to me
It's an amazing sight, it's all in your eyes


Comments about Let Me Show You Something by Funmbi Aransiola

  • Rookie Amelia Loe (11/1/2009 8:24:00 PM)

    Really enjoyed your poem, great imagery (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Joshua Whiting (11/1/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    That last line really clinches it - and another level or reflecting action.
    Nice. I like. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Quin Faas (11/1/2009 8:16:00 PM)

    I absolutely love the title as it meets this poems grace... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangnam Nam (11/1/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    eyes
    as blue as China blue
    blau eugen (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 1, 2009


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