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Premji premji (11/5/2008 3:44:00 AM)
yoonoos,
sure u have absolute control
over pen...10++++ |
Chitra Lele (10/31/2008 7:30:00 AM)
thought provoking and brilliantly penned |
Johnny Vincenzo (10/26/2008 3:09:00 AM)
I get that, life is fleeting.
Our time here is only a moment.
Our thoughts are our faith, and they lead us
through this journey. |
Sathyanarayana M V S (10/22/2008 7:06:00 AM)
A deep philosophical fact woven through intricate word/rhyme/rhthm structure makes this a great poem.........10 |
Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/10/2008 10:38:00 AM)
it's great to experience life with the enitities of fate and free will...
this roller coaster ride called 'life' will else be reallly dull.... |
Jimmy Potchoiba (9/18/2008 12:58:00 AM)
i give it a 10 i love the words and how it flows |
Tia Maria (9/14/2008 9:40:00 AM)
This soul searching is found in your spiritual mind. I relate to this masterpiece Yoonoos. Thank you 10 |
Kesav Easwaran (9/12/2008 12:05:00 AM)
life's peculiar ways are beautifully dealt with in good poetic words...what is true more than peculiar is brought out bright in the last two lines...wisdom write 10 |
June Feir-Cruz (9/11/2008 11:56:00 AM)
If I am understanding your poem correctly: Only the soul is eternal, everything is temporary. You write beautifully. |
Edwin Baldwin (9/10/2008 6:30:00 AM)
I like honest thought and true feeling...a stand alone type of poem......10
e.s.b |
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