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Siddartha Montik


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Life's Rhytm!


Seems like I am in a brisk pace of risk!

not sure anytime I liked challenges,
for all my honest longings!

like I know not myself to put,
may be hardly have any clue of life yet!

surely so open for the life always,
never was with such surprising eyes!

looks like it is an eternal search,
as I never wanted to make a breach!

Sometimes I don't know what I am,
for, never have felt the life's realm!

still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme,
as I never cause any harm even in my dream!

for, I just watch the life and learn,
un-like many others may fetch it in whole and turn-in!

So, I feel that I still have to learn,
...so that I might be with others in tune!

Submitted: Monday, July 27, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011

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  • * Sunprincess * (6/17/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    ......for sure you must mean ~ rhythm ~ ...as rhythm means: .pattern of stress in poetry: in poetry, the pattern formed by stressed and unstressed syllables
    .............congratulations on poem of the day.... (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/31/2009 10:48:00 PM)

    It is true, life has got its own rhyme, so long as there are vibrations within the life, as a dead has no rhythm or rhyme. A good theme you have to taken to compose. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Howard Kern (7/29/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    I have found that if one is not willing to risk feeling hurt, joy, and all the emotions in-between that a full life will bring. We will grow in wisdom very little! ! ! (Report) Reply

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