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Jennifer K (7/5/2010 1:53:00 AM)
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Beautiful. absolutely heart warming. Definitely what every girl would want a guy to believe about their love.
just lovely.
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Ency Bearis (5/20/2010 3:31:00 AM)
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A brilliant poem of passion and its truly beautiful.
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (5/20/2010 12:44:00 AM)
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It's the action of words..you profess
It's the passion.......and nothing less
It's the passion.......and nothing less... ou may term love for anything but is srong bond and everything.. you experience everything in love. It is occean and one must take dip to understand it deep....nicely presented....10
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Arti Chopra (5/9/2010 10:13:00 AM)
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what a lovely poem Frank...
I am reading your workafter a long time
and its truly beautiful...........
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (12/13/2009 12:07:00 AM)
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In looking back on the express creation of this piece back in the Summer of 2006, which was in fact supposed to be a bit of of a jocund venture for my (then) 12 year old daughter, who adored rhyme, knew i did not, and bet me that i could not pen-up a 15-20 line rhyming love poem in under 10 minutes....i would have never thought that almost 4 years later, that this silly piece of work would garner so much positive attention....God help the future of literature! LOL!
F j R
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello (7/7/2009 1:28:00 AM)
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May I add - 'it's the looks that give embrace'. I like the way you used repetition in th elast two lines, as it stressed the real essence of love. Beautiful.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/28/2009 5:09:00 AM)
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the multi sidedness of love seen as a rainbow all round
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Rudy Hossam (2/1/2009 1:35:00 AM)
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OUTSTANDING poem
really you managed to send the reader a very close meaning for love of course no one really knows how to give a definite meaning for love but you are so close to it
i really enjoyed reading the poem and find it really true
and you made a great ending saying 'It's the passion.......and nothing less '
thanks a lot for sharing
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Vidi Writes (1/17/2009 9:40:00 AM)
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Simple to the core
Love life, adore
Those many ‘Its’
Shows the crux.
Dear Poet, Your every Line
Flows directly into my roots
I am hopeful of colorful bloom.
Good One.
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