Gregory Allen Uhan

Rookie - 0 Points (December 24,1987 / Warren, Michigan)

Love Without End - Written With Unwritten Soul - Poem by Gregory Allen Uhan

Creator awaken in me
childhood companion of lost memory
once again take control of my mind
carry my fatigue fallen body to the end
lift my life to safe refuge
so I may reach the finish line
pushing past broken dreams, tired bones,
every promise made forced to put on hold
giving chase to the suns shadow
falling through the moon's cellar door
from the far hills to the oceans wide
harken melancholia wails
of the wind and waves
from deserted valley
to abandoned port
death echoes
the call of oblivion
I've found despite what
falters and falls daily
something inside me
refuses to fail
and when what must
of this world and of myself
comes to meet
decidedly an end
spirits transiting
voyage between
spherical junctions
then and there
I know that place
beyond time
where we are free to peer
and stretch ourselves out
across the plain of eternity
free to dip our feet in
the waters of eden
where I keep the forgotten
fragments of my heart
letters of lost love
scatted in the sands
Cinderella's glass slipper
washed up along the shore
there is where the
seeking shall cease
the point of existence where
life intersects with soul
where there is waiting
truth without lies and
love without end

Comments about Love Without End - Written With Unwritten Soul by Gregory Allen Uhan

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/24/2012 8:04:00 PM)

    You have brought us to the places where the souls are believed to reach and roam! Do we have any names when we are in the soul status? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 452 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    A depth poem with a perfect meaning. love. in my ideas it's infinity. love is the Gift of God, the entirely Merciful.
    and you have used powerful and great words here. nice use of nature and the truths. the reality that is shared here makes this work unique and nice.
    Ellias. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (11/21/2012 10:21:00 AM)

    great two-handed work.nice vision of thoughts.
    seeking to the end line of every body's life, where the sun only shines and where the existence even doesn't exist, we find out that only love exists and has always existed.
    thank you and also thank soul
    cheers~nb (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (11/19/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    Yes, all our seeking ends at the point where life intersects with the soul and where we experience true love, so divine! A great poem with so much of depth! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (11/17/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    A really really fantastic poem, the soul will always
    live on. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (11/14/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    I am not sure Greg If i should be credited for this poem, i just contribute nothing just the initial work...and that one just a random idea, i feel it must totally owned by made it as a whole, shape sharp as in your vision...i wonder how long you made it be hahahaha..good poet got good point to talk! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (11/14/2012 12:04:00 AM)

    wow..this is very nice very much enjoyed this one..cinderellas glass slipper
    washing up on the shore..blew me away.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/13/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    Lovely write. Thanks for sharing it with us (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, November 12, 2012

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