Alexander Coppedge

Rookie - 79 Points (June 25,1954 / Warrenton, North Carolina)

Mr Sun - Poem by Alexander Coppedge

Mr. Sun radiate glow abound us,
rays broke the clouds,
a light given to shine our day.
Sunlight gave say to my dawning,
beams chased the fog,
the land mist and dew away.
Glow of brilliance illuminated,
my decayed dwelling,
house which held me,
sight broke a crack,
beneath my window shade.
Vision searched deep,
peering inside my room,
found me,
fast asleep,
stretched in my bed,
I am facing away.
Mr Sun laser beam,
aims so determined,
roaming the wall,
crossing my bed edge.
Rays leap mid-way upon my back,
directly below my head,
came creeping,
flows over my shoulder,
struck me,
a straight beam in the eyes.
I arose blinded,
not friendly,
annoyed by his glory,
face shielded,
eyes crossed by my hand,
seeing still light.
Mr. Sun coming to say,
Good Morning,
giving me strength,
a clear vision of life.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A thought about the sun

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 17, 2015


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