Alexander Coppedge

Rookie - 383 Points (June 25,1954 / Warrenton, North Carolina)

Mr Sun - Poem by Alexander Coppedge

Mr. Sun rays abounds sent to the earth, they break night blanketed fall; vision by light: it give a path to go each day.
Sunlight in waves guide us, they give to us a dawn rise; rays in streams chase dark: the land mist and dew away.

Brilliant bursts, tings struck dwelling which held me; they broke a tiny crack by glass: beneath my window's shade.
Beams searched the room, it in looks to see me, I'm found asleep stretched snoring in bed; I from it: facing away.

Mr Sun warmth for me, rays roamed the wall, cross bed edge; beams crept along: Mr. Sun determined to play.
Rays bent in a mirror, leaped mid-way in air, jump from it; hop on back: them directly below the neck of my head.

Rays creep in its endeavors, forwards tips, bounced over my shoulder; a beam struck me: light direct in the eye.
I aroused in discomfort, not friendly to play, I'm annoyed shielding face; hand over my eyes: I still, am seeing light.

Mr. Sun to say hi, awake me from death grip, antics of a Good Morning; its energy of strength: its vision of life.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Note. Chapter Project Always; My Awakening Guidance: My number one buddy, not many of us view the sun as a pal, but the sun and I have had many walks; in my seen view: together as friends. Great fun.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 21, 2016


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