Alexander Coppedge

Rookie - 382 Points (June 25,1954 / Warrenton, North Carolina)

Mr Sun - Poem by Alexander Coppedge

Mr. Sun abounds, rays sent to earth, they break night blanketed fall; vision by light: a path to go each day.
Sunlight in waves guide us, give to us our dawn rise; rays streams chase dark: land mist and dew away.

Brilliant bursts, tings struck dwelling which held me; they broke a crack: beneath my window's shade.
Beams searched room, it to see me, found asleep, stretched snoring in my bed; I from it: I am facing away.

Mr Sun heat, warmth for me, rays roamed wall, cross bed edge; beams crept: Mr. Sun determined to play.
Rays bent in a mirror, leaped mid-way air, jump from it; hop on back: them directly below the neck of my head.

Rays creep in endeavors, forwards tips; bounced over my shoulder: a beam struck me direct in the eye.
I aroused in discomfort, not friendly to play, I'm annoyed shielding face; hand over my eyes: I still am seeing light.

Mr. Sun to say hi, awake me from death grip, antics of a Good Morning; its energy of strength: its vision of life.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Note. My awakening guidance: My number one buddy, not many of us view the sun as a pal, but the sun and I have had many walks; in my seen view: together as friends. Great fun.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 25, 2016


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