John Garth Raubenheimer (21/12/1947 / Johannesburg)
My First Poem - 1968
communication
mutters the sage
he nods to himself to himself to himself
as Coolhand Luke
doomed by
his own
individuality
calls to the clown
who runs on stage
what we got here
is simply
a lack of communication
and the clown
laughing for his audience
weeping
behind his mask
paints a silent poem into their mirth
what we got here
mutters
Luke
as blood pours from his shattered neck
is a failure to communicate
he nods to himself to himself to
infinity
a thousand clowns
roll in the aisles
the audience stands alone on stage
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Funny thing, like right after to himself to himself to himself, I just started nodding to myself....to myself to myself. haha i loved the beat and it flowed very easily. Great poem
your poem should get the real smart audience.
An excellent poem John, very creative indeed, I truly enjoyed it. First poem you say Nah! A big (10) from me John.---Melvina---
I wish my first poem was this good.