Haytem Fakroun

Rookie (22-Oct-1977 / Tripoli- Libya)

My own green heaven Poem by Haytem Fakroun


I am not afraid, of losing your glory
I am not keen, to keep you or to worry
I am ready to forget the pain, pain I can bury
No, I am not intending to tell you sorry

Because I found my heaven
My own green heaven
My sins can't reach seven
So I rejoice within my heaven

Enjoy your day, and plan for tomorrow
Do not forget yesterday & do not repeat the sorrow
This is my heaven; I can be your lead to follow
I can take you to the deep sea, or stand where the water is shallow

Because I found my heaven
My own green heaven
My sins can't reach seven
So I rejoice within my heaven

Submitted: Thursday, October 4, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011

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  • Rookie Haytem A.f (4/25/2010 2:34:00 AM)

    No my friend, I guess 'Pine Oil Heaven' was an inspiration on the rythem and balance of what I wrote..
    Thanks for commenting (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Macy Fawenden (7/3/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    There's a Red Hot Chili Peppers song called 'Green Heaven' which lyrically is a piece of expertise. I was wondering if the inspiration was linked? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lilac Wine (10/5/2007 12:53:00 AM)

    your green heaven sounds heavenly...lol...i loved the title and of course the poem...i loved...'I can take you to the deep sea or stand where the water is shallow'...

    thanks for sharing
    love n stuff
    lilac
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