Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,701 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Nobody Listens - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

They pray on
hidden eyes that cry silent tears
they pray on
hidden dreams that cry silent hope

They look for the vulnerable
mostly the young
they know they can shape them
to become silent victims

You can't stop them
nobody listens until years after
when it's all been done

Comments about Nobody Listens by Dave Alan Walker

  • (3/25/2013 9:01:00 PM)

    Yes like a conveying poem but no read it that's why they never listen., , , Great (Report) Reply

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  • (3/23/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    Nice poem with a punch ! ! Good write! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    Nice poem with a punch ! ! Good write! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    The finish says it all! Well done Dave. (Report) Reply

  • (3/14/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    The last two lines are the crown of the beautiful poem! GOOD WRITE! (Report) Reply

  • (3/13/2013 8:43:00 PM)

    Dave, the facts of life are written here! no one will listen! I like this poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (3/13/2013 5:58:00 PM)

    Nobody wants to listen, it would seem - we need to listen to our inner voice, our intuition. Another superb write Dave. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 13, 2013

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