Abdul Wahab


>>O love love love love love love love love Is My Love (an ode)


I love my love
As love should love
But you never love
As my love should love me.

you got your colourful wings
and you fly
but I am never invited
left as a flower without butterfly


You are the wish
You are the desire
Every one loves to fill with
But my heart pangs in despair.

Even if I close my eyes and shut my mind
My heart knows you come in as a rain
In the hearts of people but mine I find
In the desert under unbearable wreathing pain.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, January 28, 2014

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (1/19/2014 8:50:00 AM)

    Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve.
    Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points Wahab Abdul (12/31/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    thank you all very much...i appreciate whatever you all say evaluating this piece of love poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points Red Yes (12/29/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    Helloy!
    like
    I, too, so I can
    Write, compose together.
    ****************************
    His a love...
    his a love...
    your name is love
    find love you
    find love you
    lose you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points John Kim (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points John Kim (7/25/2013 8:58:00 PM)

    Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points Maryam Siddique (7/14/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    But you never love as my love should love me - being a venus in cancer and mars in scorpio I always feel my love never loves me as my love should (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,656 Points Heather Wilkins (7/11/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    in your poem you are saying you love more than the other person loves you. this is unfair love. I love the thought here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 813 Points Wahab Abdul (3/24/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    ''You are a lovely love every one loves to love
    But I got jealousy, every one loves to hate me.''

    Love is personified here, every one wants to love which is very lovely , but I got jealousy of the love itself, why does every one love ''the love '' and due my this jealousy......a negative trait of my character(implanted due to love again) is despised every one and hates me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (3/22/2012 2:39:00 AM)

    wow, amazing write! ! ! ! ! endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration.

    loved it a lot! ! ! ! ! ! keep it up friend and god Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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