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(November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

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Profoundcination

.... Someday,
.... where?
........I cannot say...
Someday then....
I will........?
........maybe someday.
The sun sets on another day,
I sit with the light...
But I am embraced by the dark.
Is it day dark or dark day?
....maybe light dark or dark light.
Is it one without the other?
........who can say, if looking
from the inside out, or outside in?
Tick, tick, tick,....8: 19 pm,
and counting.....................
which one are you?

Submitted: Wednesday, July 03, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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  • Louis Cecile (8/2/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    I like the play with words that mimic each other well as they spiral down to the end asking for a decision.

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 6:27:00 PM)

    looking from the inside out or outside in. which is better. thinking

  • King Big Head (7/10/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    I'm King Big Head the best poet in the world, that's which one I am.
    I like this, not bad. Not a bad poem.

    Your King.

  • Kelvin Owusu (7/10/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    I'd like to say id be in between but now very curious

  • Neela Nath (7/9/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    Very nice Sir.A mind in dilemma between two polar opposites.Loved.

  • Kevin Halls (7/9/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    Another deep and thought provoking poem.
    I'll have to look up the word Profoundcination!

  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/8/2013 11:21:00 PM)

    what is life without the opposites as Valerie has written...nice to read..

  • Bobby Wynn (7/7/2013 9:23:00 PM)

    I like this kind of genius, bravo.

  • Nader Baheri (7/6/2013 6:12:00 AM)

    felicitous.
    to me it is light in the dark or another way hope in the despair.
    i love it
    ~nb

  • Shahzia Batool (7/5/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    a private indulgence into a poetic utterance, punctuated by dots...and poetic state of unconsciousness...the question in the end is enough to suggest the state of mind! ! !

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