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(((((((((((((****RaINBoW***DaNcInG WitH the WinD**))))))))))))) ****from top 500 poems
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RAINBOW
Amazing lady you..
like you has never been..
like him has never seen..
and no one will know,
At night at the sea..
when there you will be..
in the wind you and who,
you will dance with the wind
when the start never end
with the waves both flow,
dropp me back to the rain
keep with you the Love's chain
then back me to the bow,
the amazing one are you...
water me and the buds.
teach the buds how to grow,
Your words like the touch,
your touch like the dew,
Keep on singing every day
toward you open the way
then the feeling let it glow,
keep on raising rate of beats
then the raising keep slow..
BROKEN HEARTS I TREAT..
n your breathing let me live
let me come, let me go..
let the sadness..me to blow,
how the chance became dance..
how the arts of the parts
let me see and you show..
God CREATION God draw,
words from the heart
from the feeling i will sew..
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The wondrous one are you.......
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TaMaRa JaY HaNaRiNg
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Sahar Sahar
(11/27/2009 7:07:00 AM) |
It is very beautiful poem to remember always with greatness in its structure
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Peter Langsford
(10/20/2009 5:35:00 AM) |
These poems are really making it into a top list somewhere?
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Rusihan Ariffin
(10/18/2009 10:29:00 AM) |
Good writing. The rhyme is consistant and brilliant.
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Obinna Eruchie
(10/13/2009 1:36:00 PM) |
Rhythmic passionate lines that go 'At night at the sea.. / when there you will be.. / in the wind you and who, / you will dance with the wind / when the start never end / with the waves both flow, / dropp me back to the rain / keep with you the Love's chain / then back me to the bow...'
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Holly Smith
(10/2/2009 4:02:00 PM) |
love the rhythm of this poem xx
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Queen Dream
(9/25/2009 5:17:00 AM) |
Your mind is full of inspiration! !
I think you should have been born at Romeo and Juliets' decade.
10/10
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