Alice Vedral Rivera (Chicago, Illinois, USA)

So now, just because of the similiar titles...I have to choose? ? No way! Love them both. This one, however, seems a bit lighter...less fear, more freedom?
I am still amazed at her couraged, however, and awed by her bravery...the one who dares to touch (or even reach for in the first place!) the wind...my kind of gal! !

This is just as lovely as the original version though the tone is perhaps cast more on the marvel of flying and less on the love! I like it though, both poems work equally well to entertain the reader. HG: -) xx

Nice............Freedom is exciting when earned not given...........Rooks

I, too, felt that feeling of lightness and floatiness from this gentle, lovely poem. Such an uplifting poem, Alice, in more ways than one!

Love, Fran xxx

This truly does have that dream quality about it...the softness, the floating, the ethereal part of it. Beautiful.

AVR, this is lovely, almost ethereal like one of those 'way out' dreams, have always wanted to learn to fly! Thanks for sharing. HG: -) xx