(December 27 1997)

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Short Talk With The Moon

I looked out of the window
And saw such a beautiful sight
The moon smiling at me oh!
His smile lights up the dark night.

I playfully smiled at him and
Asked ‘Why you stay awake all night? '
He looked at me, his smile a bit dim
‘Then who will ensure that you sleep tight? '

Still not convinced, I asked yet again
‘Don't you get bored on a lonely night? '
‘No never! I always have snores of men
To keep me company and your lamp light! '

He then said, ‘Now you sleep little girl,
When you wake up, I won't be here.
I will be on the other side of the world,
But I will keep an eye on you from there! '

Submitted: Monday, February 27, 2012


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  • Hari Smith Holms (3/4/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    Good poem with nice fabrication of word picture.

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  • teal Sky (2/29/2012 11:12:00 PM)

    great rendering of moon.and i liked the simple yet meticulous structure.

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  • Wahab Abdul (2/29/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    a very good story and nice wording with good crafting.

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  • Valerie Dohren (2/27/2012 12:43:00 PM)

    A really lovely poem - a pleasure to read.

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  • Sanu Puthupallil (2/27/2012 10:03:00 AM)

    hey a great poem.........
    really nice one to read.....short and sweet....good job

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