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Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Sincere Wait


Unforgettable
Are the years
Of youth
When dreams
Incessant dreams
Filled
Major part
Of my life.

I saw you
One day
And you
Fit the one
I saw
In my dreams
Undoubtedly
Perfectly
Then my dreams
Felt more
Real.

One moment
When
Face to face
With you
I gathered
Courage
And expressed
My sincere hope
For a life
Together.

You were
Neither embarrassed
Nor shocked
And with
A casual glance
Stated about
Certain obligations
And indicated
Your objection
To the proposal.

Later I
Looked for
Real you
And you were
Gone
Maybe that
Was your
Commitment
I thought.

Years passed
It was you
Always
In my dreams
And me
Waiting with
The expectation
That you'll
Be back after
Fulfilling your
Burdens.

Submitted: Thursday, December 12, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 09, 2014

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  • Valsa George (12/13/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    The wait has been long and tedious! Yet you waited patiently and Sir, may I conclude that you got what you have been waiting for all your youth! Interesting revelation! A romantic chapter from your life! ! (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/12/2013 7:23:00 AM)

    Patient you have been, hope your heart has been filled with love and the dream has come true. Thank you (Report) Reply

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