Symphony Of Agony Poem by adheez van der beanthz

A good sensitive poem.

There is no remorse to death. Agony repeats.

Very strong poem. Amazing words and lines. Vera Sidhwa

I do not fully understand the meaning of this, but it seems to be about a near death experience or on the threshold of death, the first stanza seems to talk about what is happening, the second is the feeling of what is happening and the third is you looking at the person dying. Great description full of dread and great twists of words. Lovely job!

Agony before death is wonderfully depicted by this poem! Keep it up by improvements further!

I have a question what's up with the numbers. Although you needn't feel inclined to answer. Very cool poem. Bien!

Very vivid. I could hear my heart pounding while I was reading. Fantastic rhyming.10++

black disappear so fast radiance hold on to the maze Though there is dread of the last breaths, still there is the radiance of hope! Enjoyed!

A very descriptive and evocative poem about final breaths.

Yes I believe that dying can be an agonizing experience for some and not any for others. It is related to how we choose to live our life and especially our last days and how God decides to show us his mercy. A truly inspiring write.