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(2nd July / 1981 nairobi)

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stand alone,

stand alone
stand alone
see my by located as that Image,
In my own shoulders,
stand alone,
see me that by all meaning's,
stand alone,
see the new world,
coming all the way in my loneliness,
see me by as that image,
in my soul,
I be suffering,
seeing that I laced these words,
stand alone and see the clear picture,
the credibility of my incredible all unbelievable,
teach me the hard lessons,
coming all the way up,
let me raise the star,
the son the Star,
for the Father's ressurection.

Submitted: Saturday, March 08, 2008

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  • Tosa Claudiu (3/8/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    liked the first half.

    the first thing i didn't like was 'i be suffering', it absolutley has no place in the poem.
    then, the 'credibility of my incredible all unbelievable' sounds nasty.

    i mean the intro in the first half is quite nice, but when you start to be confessional in that sincere manner you kinda get far from the first half and the poem looses its credibility.

    i also didn't like the last to verses, they make the poem sound religious or something and the beggining makes me expect different.

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