Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,773 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Summer’s Dance (Pantoum) - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Summer rainbow's ribbon still stretches in the blue rain
As green snakes dance to the tune of charmers jazz flutes
Blue butterflies chase velvety bumble bees singing duets in vain
Summer laughs around red velvety roses and green fruits

As green snakes dance to the tune of charmers jazz flutes
Summer's ending her path over meadow, with a dream of green
Summer laughs around red velvety roses and green fruits
Moon shines behind the barrier of cloud's fence, as a queen.

Summer's ending her path over meadow, with a dream of green
Into the autumn sky with puffs of cotton clouds and floating light
Moon shines behind the barrier of cloud's fence, as a queen.
With dancing, green shadow sprites appear all round the sight.

Into the autumn sky with puffs of cotton clouds and floating light
Blue butterflies chase velvety bumble bees singing duets in vain
With dancing, green shadow sprites appear all round the site.
Summer rainbow's ribbon still stretches in the blue rain.


Comments about Summer’s Dance (Pantoum) by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie - 5 Points Callie Carroll (8/9/2011 9:23:00 PM)

    This is a very complicated form which you do very well. I especially like the image of a summer rainbow as a ribbon. I do sometimes get lost in the color words, especially 'green.' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 24, 2013


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