Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 243 Points (India)

The Night Of Lunar Eclipse - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Walking miles and miles
when I reached there
on a luminous night
thirsty eyes below
and a full moon above
and someone whispering
Your journey ends here
made it all happen
in a blink of time.

She spoke to me, Luna
I spoke to her
and we spoke to each other
through our open eyes
until the shadow walked
slowly veiling her face.

A dark line also walked
gradually engulfing my world.
Don't do that
Don't do that
I screamed and yelled
but she did not hear.

I wept so much
that my eyes were blurred
or perhaps
I became fully blind.

The last thing I saw
was a sad smile
of her corona, a proof
she still existed.

She is no more
She is no more
I cried, I cried

but none was there
to tell me it was
a night of lunar eclipse
as I turned to lunatic
by that one moonlit night.







© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.


Comments about The Night Of Lunar Eclipse by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Veteran Poet - 1,614 Points Adeline Foster (5/17/2014 12:30:00 PM)

    It got a chuckle from me. Perhaps because I too have used the concept as a diversion. Read mine – Eclipse –
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  • Gold Star - 8,164 Points Herbert Guitang (4/25/2014 6:42:00 AM)

    Great work on this poem. Nice sharing (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 646 Points Marilyn Lott (4/13/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    What a tender beautiful poem. I love the title as well. Great job, Palas! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014


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