gule rukhsar

Rookie - 0 Points (malakand agency / 24.11.1994)

Try Strive Live - Poem by gule rukhsar

a little birdie with broken wings
fly fly rise high
as it rise along it sings
come on lets touch the sky

the little spidie with broken arm
up up move up
as it strives along its swarm
come on rise up

so you fragile human with broken heart
mend mend mend it
as you live mend your heart
yes come one yes do it

Poet's Notes about The Poem

wrote at the age of 16.
dated: 16.8.2011

Comments about Try Strive Live by gule rukhsar

  • Veteran Poet - 1,490 Points Xelam Kan™ (11/9/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    nice..... i deed each n evry soul try br survive,3 stanze smoothly tugd the whole drama
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 9, 2012

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