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Twin Triplets. No.5

Infinity

Parallel lines stretching, stretching, ing..ng…g!
Neither made to intersect
Nor meant to pause

Hope

A rain cloud suspended
Between the vault of heaven above
And the parched land below

Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013

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  • Valerie Dohren (2/14/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Love your twin triplets Valsa - Hope here, great verse.

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  • Diane Hine (2/13/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Yes, yes stretching not stretched - an important distinction. Succinct wisdom.

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/12/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Distilled thoughts in the Twin Triplets of Infinity and Hope are greatly STRIKING! Your imagination is very ENCHANTING!

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