Valsa George


Twin Triplets. No.5 - Poem by Valsa George

Infinity

Parallel lines stretching, stretching, ing..ng…g!
Neither made to intersect
Nor meant to pause

Hope

A rain cloud suspended
Between the vault of heaven above
And the parched land below


Comments about Twin Triplets. No.5 by Valsa George

  • Silver Star - 3,344 Points Valerie Dohren (2/14/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Love your twin triplets Valsa - Hope here, great verse. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,924 Points Diane Hine (2/13/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Yes, yes stretching not stretched - an important distinction. Succinct wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 653 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/12/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Distilled thoughts in the Twin Triplets of Infinity and Hope are greatly STRIKING! Your imagination is very ENCHANTING! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013


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