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Valsa George


Twin Triplets. No.7


MOMENTS

They flash into our midst in a twinkle
To seize them in our hold, as we scrabble,
They glide into eternity like a trickle

ORPHAN

Man and woman in unity begot
Soon in discord forgot
Now a castaway sans either's support

Submitted: Monday, February 25, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, February 26, 2013

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/28/2013 9:17:00 AM)

    The triplet regarding Moments and the one regarding Orphan are each in its own way creditable! - The line They glide into eternity like a trickle in the 1st triplet is so attractive-! In the 2nd triplet every orphan is made- a castaway sans either's support is an apt and true statement! ! Lovely too! ! (Report) Reply

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