Treasure Island

Valsa George


Twin Triplets. No.8


A PILGRIM

A tramp in the eternal quest after love
Halting in and moving out from shrine to shrine
Until he merges with Love beyond all shades and sheen

STARS

Celestial wayfarers of the night
Dancing damsels with the light
Fading phantoms at Phoebes' sight

Submitted: Thursday, February 28, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 01, 2013

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  • Nader Baheri (3/3/2013 2:52:00 AM)

    great work.reminds me the film by Luis Bunuel (milky way) .the ending is really marvelous.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (3/2/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    Very good Valsa...the pilgrim is a searcher
    Stars fade at phoebes' sight? A bird at dawn?
    How complete in such few words. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (3/2/2013 10:39:00 AM)

    A pilgrim in eternal quest after love finally merging with eternal Love is a wonderful thought!
    In stars considering them as dancing damsels and celestial wayfarers and finally fading at Phoebes 'sight is lovely! Both the triplets are excellent! ! (Report) Reply

  • Www.poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 Search 2 (3/1/2013 4:36:00 PM)

    The eternal quest of the pilgrim is quite interestingly correct perhaps. The stars as the wayfarers when we travel in the infinite pavements of the universe is a superb idea! The sight of Phoebe is just the break for a show going on otherwise.
    These are fine twin triplets though not identical. (Report) Reply

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