Midnights Voice

Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Uh Huh


Living in a four wheeled desperation
At the end of a graveled road
Living on electronic e-mail
And all the mails are hammering me down

I hop around from home to home
More times than than a toad
Has bumps on his ass
Living in a house of glass

My short cut sleaves
Give me much more room
To wear my grief
Like unto a shadowy thief

Stealing thoughts you thought were safe
From your vaulted heart
Like leaching away your vibrant blood
Sucking up your love

Welcome me into your house of peril
Let me steal a kiss
A taste of your lip
And from your soul a sip

Submitted: Tuesday, August 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (9/4/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    A very intense write this is and also a most passionate one.
    Reminds me of a love story told with such vibrancy and
    openess. Living in a car and loaded down with emails. Stealing
    thoughts is a good line. Enjoyed this. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/31/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    is this the words of a truck driver. seems to me it is. good read enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,354 Points Vera Sidhwa (8/21/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    Yes, excessive email in a car at the end of a graveled road would make anybody insane.
    Poem with bulk and density. I loved it. Ten of ten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/17/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    as a vampire
    he sucks her blood
    from your hearted love
    and turn strong, astonished
    with the strength of the current
    clouds your eyes and drown
    in a endless red river!
    Uh Huh! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/14/2013 7:25:00 PM)

    as a toad, the emotions jump from one place to another..at last try to be satisfied with usual gesture of kiss and a sip from the soul...Nice to see the animal in action... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Lucifera Santez (8/14/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    Welcome me into your house of peril
    Let me steal a kiss
    A taste of your lip
    And from your soul a sip.
    my favorite lines.
    a wonderful write.
    loved it.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 3:07:00 AM)

    AN excellent piece and stunning climax! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Simon Odhiambo (8/13/2013 12:46:00 AM)

    An imaginative and well thought work of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 429 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/12/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    A POEM OF DEPTH AND GREAT IMAGINATION! BEAUTIFUL! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (8/12/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    A deep poem with imagination and meaning. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (8/11/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Deep. Uh Huh, its Midnight voice_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/11/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    very good poem
    imaginative and meaningful
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 652 Points Paul Brookes (8/11/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    We all live in houses of glass it's our souls and hearts that are opaque. A very deep poem which needs reading several times if not many times to get its meanings of which there are many Great poem.10/10 BB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 276 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/10/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    thoughts passing to every reader,
    thoughts devoured thoughts that linger (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,580 Points Lyn Paul (8/10/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    I think you have expressed alot in these words Thomas. Particularly the 1st 3 verses. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (8/10/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    Very imaginative - deep and cryptic. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,120 Points Diane Hine (8/9/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    If you're eating souls, you're on a low-cal diet. You could gain weight gorging on our paranoia though.
    Diabolical but very entertaining! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (8/9/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    it is a sip of fun
    of your poetry art (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/9/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    you always amaze me with your fancy humorous words bravo sir you deserve a standing ovation (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/9/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    stealing thought you thought were safe from your vaulted heart like leaching away your vibrant blood sucking up your love. a good read (Report) Reply

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