(April 2,1997)

What do you think this poem is about?

Unceasing Curse

'You view everything as though
It's a battle. Why? '

I look away, reminiscing.
I look back at my past.
I see the struggle of growing.
I see myself all alone,
Fending for myself.
I see myself morph.
I enter the mental
Plane of confusion,
Doubt, and weakness.
I see myself lost in a
Consuming darkness.

I was frustrated and confused.
I felt scattered and diffused.
I was frightened and impaired,
I felt restrained and ensnared.

I look again and I see
My slain enemies.
I look to the inquirer,
Eyes full of dark sadness.

'Isn't it obvious? '

Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, June 27, 2012


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  • Captain Cur (7/6/2012 4:55:00 PM)

    Honestly bleeds throughout this poem.
    Great write, strong words and symbolism.

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/26/2012 11:01:00 PM)

    A nice poem. I like it. now u r official poet.

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