Treasure Island

george albot


When the tight top sings''?


I would have thought that the long sock
Or the remark about the wedding or Vanessa
Or even the title all over, would have had a lot more
Of an impact
Or the main one, I CAN’T BE ARSE
((that would be me being shallow))
But none of them the word “shallow! !
It just shows you ‘’

Your text to me was’’ and I quote
Why do I get the feeling that’s it?
That was really deep? ? ?

Why say such a thing
When I had said what I said
That I love you and see you Monday
But what did hurt, is when I
Was in the car park and you said
to me
I thought you’d gone
That remark made me feel worthless
So thanks for that

But what you need to do is read
The one from
Yesterdays, all-over’’ a few more times

But before I go and have a shower
Had you shrunk that top you had on yesterday? ? ? ?
And also the text you sent a cupful of spell’ Lin was Wong! ! !
You miss out N’T in one of the words, and instead of path cross
It should have said gate is always open, but the bush needs a trim
Sorry that me being a shallow again
But saying that, would have been possible for me to drown in it
Defiantly bigger enough and I made it wet enough

Hear one for you shallow and shallot is so close in there
spel’lin, sorry spellynn one can be so meaningful
And the other just there to make you cry’’
Night night

It can be over, but please don’t put it on me
I should be worth more than that to you
Let me know,
I’ll take it as off unless you tell me different

Submitted: Sunday, October 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013
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