Treasure Island

Gregory Allen Uhan

(December 24,1987 / Warren, Michigan)

Where Does Freewill Lead, If We Chose Not To Follow Love


Love is not a law
We follow because we are told

Love is a vow made of freewill
In the light of truth

Without love life is chaos
Law cannot prevent chaos
only conscious love is capable
of creating
maintain/sustaining
life in an environment of chaos

Love is a lesson learned form experience
Not a law that can be enforced

What is freewill without love?
But the cause of suffering

What is love without equality?
Other than discrimination

What does discrimination lead to?
Other than self-loathing

What is life without freewill?

Freewill being law
Does not excuse us
From the consequences of our actions

Compassion is creation's compass
Navigating the seas of karma
Leading us back to pure
Eternal consciousness

Love is the light of life's journey
The only means in leading ourselves towards salvation.

Submitted: Monday, March 04, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 05, 2013

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  • Roseann Shawiak (3/10/2013 11:30:00 PM)

    Very well put Greg, I totally agree and love your poem. I like the line: Love is a lesson learned from experience, not a law that can be enforced. So totally true. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (3/8/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    Salvation..Yeah, love can lead us to our goals. and faith can bring love! brilliant words my dear friend!
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (3/4/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Love is the light of life's journey. I like it. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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