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Fay Slimm

(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Wisdom Of Love.

True love will not easily split into parts.
To represent truth, love is wholehearted.

Can a droplet be mistaken for a sea,
Or a whisper of sound for a symphony?

Flakes of devotion, like snowflakes, will melt
In life's heat, security then is never felt.

Love is complete, so it's parts make a shell
Which cannot be broken, as time will tell.

To love only in part is not love's proof.
To say we loved once is denying the truth.

The sum of whole love is greater by far,
To describe it, than the sum of it's parts.

To say we loved once is not seeing love right
True love cannot die, therefore love outlasts life.

Love stands alone with it's clear clarion call.
We who say we loved once never loved at all.

Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Edited: Friday, July 15, 2011

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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/4/2013 11:42:00 PM)

    Very true, emphatically so. Beautifully expressed.
    Wisdom of love is overwhelming. Truly, Love outlasts life. (Report) Reply

  • Susan Jarvis (12/7/2009 3:48:00 AM)

    These beautiful couplets of love have touched my heart, Fay. A wonderful poem! S :) (Report) Reply

  • Georgia Girl (12/2/2009 11:28:00 AM)

    Fay this is fantastic and you should publish it, very wise and true and so well put together....10 (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (11/30/2009 4:28:00 AM)

    Love is in the air and the wisdom of it intoxicating 'Love stands alone' holding two....I can say this with conviction, my wife was 16 and I 19 when wed, and 50 odd years on still in love! ....................++++10 for wisdom
    regards (Report) Reply

  • David Harris (11/21/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Fay, a beautiful concept of couplets on an equally beautiful poem filled with the wisdom of love. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend.
    Hugs David (Report) Reply

  • Bob Gibson (11/19/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, from finish to start
    true love to brings pain, to a soldiers wife's heart
    how do they endure? the time spent apart
    the longing, the emptiness! when its time to depart (Report) Reply

  • Bob Blackwell (11/19/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    Wise words from a wise lady, you are so right true love never dies. Lovely couplets written by a true poet. Love Bob 10 (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (11/18/2009 2:03:00 PM)

    'Love stands alone with it's clear clarion call.
    We who say we loved once never loved at all. '

    Very wisely said - Fay....and well crafted too...10 (Report) Reply

  • Tom Balch (11/18/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    Wise word's of love from a wise and well loved lady, nice one Fay 10/10 Tom (Report) Reply

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