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Huntwork Hewitt

The Only Drowning Goldfish

I dreamed I was
I dreamed I was a goldfish
I dreamed I lived
I lived beneath the water
I dreamed I was
I dreamed that I was gorgeous
I dreamed your gun
I dreamed that you shot me
I dreamed that I was gorgeous
I dreamed that you shot me
I dreamed life was
I dreamed that life was easy
I dreamed we laughed
Our laughs turned into goldfish
I dreamed they were
I dreamed that they were gorgeous
I dreamed they swam and nobody could hurt them
Nobody could hurt them
And if I was a goldfish
I'd dream that I was drowning
Drowning on the sidewalk
And only you could save me
And if you wouldn't save me
I'd dream that we were goldfish
I'd dream that we were drowning
The only drowning goldfish
I dreamed Goldy
I dreamed he was a person
I dreamed he laughed
His laughs turned into people
I dreamed he spoke
And told me all his secrets
I dreamed he said
That killing fish is easy
And being kind is easy
And drowning fish are stupid
Drowning fish are stupid


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