Ben No

Rookie (19/03/1979 / Swansea)

Ben No Poems

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  • Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler (2/10/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    thanks for your kind comments. i hadn't been here in a long time, and i noticed you commented on nearly everything i posted. i appreciate it. glad you enjoyed it.

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  • Richard Cock III (7/13/2006 12:37:00 PM)

    post something new why dontcha!

  • Mandy MMR (5/15/2006 8:18:00 PM)

    I think that your poems/lyrics are great. Though I highly reckomend to keep your language in black and white. I'm not the biggest fan on colorful languages. Besides that, I love your work. Keep writing!

    God Bless,
    Mandy MMR

    P.S. Smile, God loves you!

Best Poem of Ben No

Lights

red lines
and blue lines, intersecting and
encircling these two obsidian monuments
who stand haughty and implacable normally
but with such thrashing, screaming silken lights
they are rendered gaudy, look you can see
the scarlet shape of anger on one blank stone,
red light now ripcurled
and forming a frowning eyebrow
(and yes, it does look angry)
that then rejoins the dance
with the blue, who has been making
the other monument look depressed,
coiled ribbon of blue
twists itself into a noose, slides
down the face of this obsidian ...

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