Sweet Childhood Memories Poem by Ben No

Sweet Childhood Memories

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It's just how it is.
Sorry.
Condemned,
like a building no longer fit
for habitation,
where the dry rot has spread to our hearts
and the termites are the tiny monarchs
of our crumbling ambitions.
When I was a child,
we always thought such houses
to be haunted.
Maybe our young selves
heard an echo of some truth;
that a haunting was coming.
Not for these broken-windowed wrecks
but for us.

Sorry.
It's just how it is.

Sleep tight.

Monday, November 12, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: haunted,sorry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 27 September 2012

Ben No More poetic language than some of your others, but with that same stoic storyteller sense to it. -chuck

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Linda Weischedel 31 December 2007

GREAT POEM BEN This is my favorite part of your poem: When I was a child, we always thought such houses to be haunted. Maybe our young selves heard an echo of some truth; that a haunting was coming.

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