i was about to give up,
writing 4 eva,
but some people said no,
that i was too good to give up,
i thought they were crazy,
there minds had gone hazy,
but then they gave me,
words of encouragement,
that made me think,
maybe i'm not so bad,
maybe i should keep writing,
but then i read my work again,
and realised where i'd gone wrong,
i wasn't focusing on the positives,
and the good things,
all i could see were the errors,
and the problems that couldn't be fixed,
and i realised that,
underneath the negatives,
my writing wasn't so bad,
and so that helped me to keep writnig,
so i have to thank,
all those people who,
didn't give up on me,
and gave me those,
words of encouragement,
thank you.