Words Of Encouragement Poem by Flame6203E ...

Words Of Encouragement

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i was about to give up,
writing 4 eva,
but some people said no,
that i was too good to give up,
i thought they were crazy,
there minds had gone hazy,
but then they gave me,
words of encouragement,
that made me think,
maybe i'm not so bad,
maybe i should keep writing,
but then i read my work again,
and realised where i'd gone wrong,
i wasn't focusing on the positives,
and the good things,
all i could see were the errors,
and the problems that couldn't be fixed,
and i realised that,
underneath the negatives,
my writing wasn't so bad,
and so that helped me to keep writnig,
so i have to thank,
all those people who,
didn't give up on me,
and gave me those,
words of encouragement,
thank you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 24 June 2008

Yes dont give up! You are such a good poet and just a cool person. Dont give up a dream. ♥ **tyease**

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Mattie Mils 07 March 2008

your poems are inspiring.they are the bomb.you've inspired me to start writing some of my own.Thanks alot

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(red) harley (blue) suici 12 February 2008

my words of encouagement are! ! ! ! ! ! .....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (0_0)

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I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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