In Need Of Some Guidance

Rookie (07-10-1991 / Detroit, Michigan)

In Need Of Some Guidance Poems

1. Goodbye 2/10/2009
2. To My Friend 4/5/2009

Comments about In Need Of Some Guidance

  • Donna Elouise James (3/19/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    Love the poem Goodbye
    very strong use of lines
    an pacy
    gave it a 10
    Donna

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To My Friend

You'd think I'd be used to everyone leaving,
Which I am.
But it still hurts.
You'd think I'd expect you to do the same,
but I didn't.
You were my friend,
or so I thought.
I looked at you as someone I trusted, completely, which I rarely do.
I shared my secrets with you,
even when it was hard to tell the truth,
I never lied to you,
whatever you asked,
you had an honest answer.
Then all of a sudden it wasn't what you wanted to hear.
Saying that the open truth could lead to teh end.
You were like the rest.
Left without saying what it ...

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