I write poems to pass time. It's a hobby, not a profession. I'm learning and I'm looking to excel and develop my poetry skills. I am only 17 years old, so there is still a lot of time for me to improve. ANy constructive criticism is welcome.
I would say you were an angel but you have no wing
But you deliver whatever an angel should bring
I would say you were my destiny but you have no child
My heart went liquid when you first smiled
...
Fed up with finding rhymes
To define my difficult times
Fed up with thinking of feeling
My true feelings are revealing
...
Light shines through the elastic,
My eyes open and close drastic
like a broken hinged door.
A high shriek pierces the air and then
...
I write poems and stories and short ones too,
The dove in my latest was meant to be you.
I do it mostly to watch the minutes pass,
To tell a girl I love her behind the glass.
...
Walk past the earthly thorns
Ignoring what the surface warns
The other side is like no other
Move boundless with your brother
...