I Would Say Poem by Jared Gobey

I Would Say

Rating: 5.0


I would say you were an angel but you have no wing
But you deliver whatever an angel should bring
I would say you were my destiny but you have no child
My heart went liquid when you first smiled
I would say you were Cupid but you have no arrow
Your voice is the song of a million sparrow
I would say you were a masterpiece but you have no frame
Air is to my lungs as my heart is to your name
I would say you were a rose but you have no blades
My tears are waterfalls, the water cascades
I would say you were the sky but you are not blue
My eyes are immobile by this unholy view
I would say you were mine but you're yet to say yes
Wishing you all of my love, my faith and my success.

Wednesday, January 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,destiny,success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is dedicated to the girl of my dreams. For confidentiality reasons, I have decided not to name her: D
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Thomas 09 January 2013

I love this! Extremely well written. So sweet & thoughtful. Kudos! :)

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Eric Thomas 09 January 2013

So sweet! =] Extremely well written. Well done, mate!

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