Jared Gobey

[Force] (November 11 1995 / Chichester)

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I write poems to pass time. It's a hobby, not a profession. I'm learning and I'm looking to excel and develop my poetry skills. I am only 17 years old, so there is still a lot of time for me to improve. ANy constructive criticism is welcome. more »

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  • Tabatha Carr (1/17/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    I think your poems are brilliant - keep on - I look foward to reading any new ones you submit

  • Eric Thomas Eric Thomas (1/9/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    I love your poem I would say. Nicely written :) Keep it up!

  • Jayjo Shenaigh (1/9/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    I love your poems! Rated.

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Best Poem of Jared Gobey

I Would Say

I would say you were an angel but you have no wing
But you deliver whatever an angel should bring
I would say you were my destiny but you have no child
My heart went liquid when you first smiled
I would say you were Cupid but you have no arrow
Your voice is the song of a million sparrow
I would say you were a masterpiece but you have no frame
Air is to my lungs as my heart is to your name
I would say you were a rose but you have no blades
My tears are waterfalls, the water cascades
I would say you were the sky but you are not blue
My eyes are immobile by this ...

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