Jessica Carlson

Rookie (6-19-90 / Omaha, NE)

Jessica Carlson Poems

1. Open Up 2/6/2005
2. Alright? 2/6/2005
3. What I Need 11/24/2004
4. My Fault 11/24/2004
5. Hard Time 12/22/2004
6. Latenight Lullaby 12/22/2004
7. Too Blind To See 2/6/2005
8. Prayer 2/6/2005
9. Damned Self Distruction 6/23/2005
10. Playing With Fire 6/23/2005
11. Fueling The Fire 6/23/2005
12. Masquerade Of Fire 6/23/2005
13. Broken Picture Frame 2/6/2005
14. Dear Confused 11/24/2004

Comments about Jessica Carlson

  • dissatified exmember (2/22/2005 1:24:00 PM)

    Jessica you are letting your feelings show. Thats wonderful. You are only 15 years old and in time, if you enjoy poetry as much as the people on this site do, you will learn skills that show you how to express yourself in different ways. Read as much poetry as you can and then you will see what I mean. You will get ideas of expressing all the great stuff you write.Then you will be able to put it into better poetic form.

    Keep it up. You will be a great poet if you take advice and use what is given


    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Poetry Hound (12/23/2004 7:12:00 AM)

    You obviously have a lot of emotion. But writing your emotions down doesn't automatically make them poetry, or rather it doesn't necessarily make them good poetry. The emotions you convey are similar to what many many people experience. So I would try to convey them in some unusual or non-typical way. That way you get readers to see things differently from their own emotional experience and what moves readers is relating to the emotion but seeing it conveyed in a somewhat different and more interesting light than what they typically experience. Make sense? Anyway, it's just my two cents.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Best Poem of Jessica Carlson

What I Need

I'm just a girl in a cruel world
But I need things too
There's times I'm going to need your hand
And there's times I'm goin got need so much more
There's times I'm going to need you to comfort me
And there are times I'm just going to need you to
Leave me the hell alone
There's times I'm going to need to party
And there are times I'm going to need to be alone
But what I really need is you right there
Understanding what I need the most

Read the full of What I Need
[Report Error]