Justin Le

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Your gorgeous blonde hair shimmering in the light,
Your beautiful smile ever so bright,
Your stunning hazel eyes sparkle like a star,
Like a broken glass found in a bar;
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Day by day I feel the need to kill
to stain with their blood soon I will.
The extent of me deeds will be sought,
to see them cry as they twisted and fought.
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Thank You

Your gorgeous blonde hair shimmering in the light,
Your beautiful smile ever so bright,
Your stunning hazel eyes sparkle like a star,
Like a broken glass found in a bar;
Every time I think of you,
I gain confidence to do what I do,
And you make me feel all warm inside,
You could cheer me up even if my mother died;
You are a big part of my life,
And if you weren’t here I’d take a knife,
You are the one who makes me happy,
I know it sounds kind of sappy,
But I can’t thank you enough
Because you are the one that I really do love.

Justin Le Comments

Paul Slinski 10 April 2005

Before you start commenting on other people's poetry, I would suggest doing a bit more reading. Your 'style' borders on classic poetry mixed with modern-day angst poems. This is to be expected, I suppose; you're young and you have to start somewhere. But without the proper knowlege of the many, many formats of poetry, you cannot possibly leave me or anyone else an honest, thoughtful critique. Read more modern poetry as it is a bit easier to grasp. Explore and expand.

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