Justin Le

Justin Le Poems

1. Thank You 4/9/2005
2. Day By Day 4/9/2005

Comments about Justin Le

  • Paul Slinski Paul Slinski (4/10/2005 9:50:00 PM)

    Before you start commenting on other people's poetry, I would suggest doing a bit more reading.

    Your 'style' borders on classic poetry mixed with modern-day angst poems. This is to be expected, I suppose; you're young and you have to start somewhere.

    But without the proper knowlege of the many, many formats of poetry, you cannot possibly leave me or anyone else an honest, thoughtful critique.

    Read more modern poetry as it is a bit easier to grasp.

    Explore and expand.

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Best Poem of Justin Le

Day By Day

Day by day I feel the need to kill
to stain with their blood soon I will.
The extent of me deeds will be sought,
to see them cry as they twisted and fought.
They'll all pay with their horrific screams
for when they all laughed and pointed at me.

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