Kakinomoto no Asomi Hitomaro

Kakinomoto no Asomi Hitomaro Poems

By the Karu road,
under the mallard’s flyway,
my love, my sister,
lived in her small town,

and deep desire

to see her filled my soul.
...
...

On the sands of Sanuki's shore
folk gather fine seaweed,
and the eye never wearies of this fair land,
...

On the sea at Ômi,
Plovers fly the waves at dusk
And with their cries
My mind is turned
...

Coarse woven cloth
The beach at Fujie:
Catching sea bass,
A fisherman, is that what I'll seem?
...

From uncountable
Ôtsu, she came and,
On the day I met her,
Glanced at her but briefly,
...

On this autumn mountain
Tumbling yellowed leaves
For just a moment
Cease your scattering
...

The sea at Kehi
Appears most tranquil, for
As harvested wild rice
...

To the far-reaching
Heavens has gone
My prince, so
Unaware of passing days and nights
...

A twist of folded grass, your pillow,
The only lodging on your journey;
Whose husband, I wonder?
Though in your land, forgotten
...

By Kara's cape

(what sea-babble Kara hears)
...

By the sea in Iwami,
On the shore at Tsuno,
There is no beach,
For folk to see;
...

Distant as the heavens,
'long lengthy country roads
Filled with feeling have I come
...

Jewelled seaweed,
Province of Sanuki:
Is it your nature that
The sight of you will never sate?
...

I do speak these words, though
They may profane what's holy;
I speak them
Filled with awe:
...

Lamplit
Akashi: to your great strait
I enter in, and on the selfsame day
Will I row on, parting,
...

My grey-dappled steed
Strides swiftly and
Amongst the clouds
My beloved's home
...

Of Inabi field,
That I could ne'r pass by,
Was I thinking when,
My beloved
...

I feel my body must soon rest
among the rocks of Kamo's hill.
Not knowing my sad fate, alas,
my wife will still await me!
...

On Tsunu's coast close by the waters of Ihami
where men say there is no sheltering bay
or salty flats that furnish shell fish,
...

Eighty warriors,
On Uji river,
To the fish nets
Drifting waves:
...

Kakinomoto no Asomi Hitomaro Biography

Kakinomoto no Hitomaro (c. 662 - 710) was a Japanese poet and aristocrat of the late Asuka period. He was the most prominent of the poets included in the Man'yōshū, and was particularly represented in volumes 1 and 2. In Japan, he is considered one of the Thirty-six Poetry Immortals. After the Heian period he was often called "Hito-maru" Hitomaro is famed for his long poems, such as "In the sea of ivy clothed Iwami", "The Bay of Tsunu", and "I loved her like the leaves." 19 of his chōka (or nagauta, "long poems") were included in the Man'yōshū and 75 or so tanka (or mijikauta, "short poems") were likewise selected. Many of his poems were written on the topics of public occasions; such as his "Lament for Prince Takechi", written as part of the mourning ceremonies for Takechi. Other poems were written on occasions in his life when he was particularly moved: parting from his wife, mourning for his wife, or on seeing a corpse.)

The Best Poem Of Kakinomoto no Asomi Hitomaro

On The Death Of His Wife (I)

By the Karu road,

under the mallard’s flyway,

my love, my sister,

lived in her small town,

and deep desire

to see her filled my soul.

But people all around with curious eyes

prevented constant visits,

and few private meetings

were granted us.

Yet I always trusted

the way would be clear,

though endless as the wild vine,

at last to meet my dear,

like a hopeful sailor

trusting on his tall ship.



Alas,

while our ways of love we still kept secret,

secret as pool sheltered in warm rocks,

my world a sunless waste became,

and clouds snuffed out the moon that lit my heaven.

For she, my love—as graceful as deep kelp fronds—

has faded from my days like autumn's glory.

Such is the news the running messenger brings.

Like the clang of the bow-string on

a whitewood bow they hit my ear,

but I find no word to answer

or means to offer solace,

any words are aching pain.



Yet I would assuage my sorrow

by even its smallest part—

so towards Karu where she always watched

my coming, I go on my way listening,

listening for her voice, but only hear

the screams of wild fowl flying

across a sullen landscape.

I meet and scan the faces

of folk along the soldier’s road

but no face like hers I see.

So nothing is left—

I can but call her name

and wave my sleeve in vain.



I would gladly follow

the wandering spirit of my love

through precipitous ways

hidden by autumn's red leaves,

but cannot tread those unknown mountain trails

That lie beyond my ken.



In autumn’s fall of scarlet forest leaves

I see the message coming for me

and think of one day of love

that never more shall be.

Kakinomoto no Asomi Hitomaro Comments

Fabrizio Frosini 14 August 2016

' When she was still alive ' When she was still alive We would go out, arm in arm, And look at the elm trees Growing on the embankment In front of our house. Their branches were interlaced. Their crowns were dense with spring leaves. They were like our love. Love and trust were not enough to turn back The wheels of life and death. She faded like a mirage over the desert. One morning like a bird she was gone In the white scarves of death. Now when the child Whom she left in her memory Cries and begs for her, All I can do is pick him up And hug him clumsily. I have nothing to give him. In our bedroom our pillows Still lie side by side, As we lay once. I sit there by myself And let the days grow dark. I lie awake at night, sighing till daylight. No matter how much I mourn I shall never see her again. They tell me her spirit May haunt Mount Hagai Under the eagles’ wings. I struggle over the ridges And climb to the summit. I know all the time That I shall never see her, Not even so much as a faint quiver in the air. All my longing, all my love Will never make any difference. [ Kakinomoto no Hitomaro ]

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 June 2016

Kakinomoto no Hitomaro is one of the Thirty-six Poetry Immortals (Immortals of Poetry) - 三十六歌仙 Sanjūrokkasen - They are 36 Japanese poets of the Nara, Asuka and Heian periods selected by Fujiwara no Kintō as exemplars of Japanese poetic ability.

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 June 2016

Fujiwara no Kintō established the grouping of the Thirty-Six Poetic Geniuses or Thirty-six Poetry Immortals (Sanjūrokkasen) in the ''Anthology of Poems by the Thirty-Six Poets'': Kakinomoto no Hitomaro Ki no Tsurayuki Ōshikōchi Mitsune Lady Ise Ōtomo no Yakamochi Yamabe no Akahito Ariwara no Narihira Henjō Sosei Ki no Tomonori Sarumaru no Taifu Ono no Komachi Fujiwara no Kanesuke Fujiwara no Asatada Fujiwara no Atsutada Fujiwara no Takamitsu Minamoto no Kintada Mibu no Tadamine Saigū no Nyōgo / Kishi Joō Ōnakatomi no Yoritomo Fujiwara no Toshiyuki Minamoto no Shigeyuki Minamoto no Muneyuki Minamoto no Saneakira Fujiwara no Kiyotada Minamoto no Shitagō Fujiwara no Okikaze Kiyohara no Motosuke Sakanoue no Korenori Fujiwara no Motozane Ōnakatomi no Yoshinobu Fujiwara no Nakafumi Taira no Kanemori Mibu no Tadami Kodai no Kimi Nakatsukasa

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 May 2016

kuni wasuretaru / ie matamaku ni Kakinomoto no Hitomaro (Man’yōshū: 426)

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Sue Powell 20 May 2014

His best poem, in my opinion, is 'When She Was Still Alive', which is not listed on this website.

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