Katherine Patrick

Katherine Patrick Poems

I feel my blood run cold
No longer feel the heat of you
Everything we been through now im done
You walk away not even turning back
...

Where the light in my world?
Am I blind to it?
I want to be happy like everyone else i see
But all i have is this fake smile
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Why am I crying for you?
You dont even see me anymore...
I disappear from your veiw
Why do you hate me so?
...

He steps in the room
my whole face lights up
like a ray of sunshine
My love is my sun
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Maybe its living inside of me?
Or am I dreaming of all of the lies?
Nomore hiding the thing that inside of me
Sorry but I cant change who I am
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Noone knows how to stop them from happening
Incredibly there is cure for them
Getting ready for the ongoing battles that takes place
Hard to deal with the demons every night
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I met you by the chance of fate
Now we are loving each other like never before
The warmth is nothing like ever felt before
It different then normal people
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Katherine Patrick Biography

Im 17 about to be 18 years old. i always want to publish my work online. Im shy and dont speak well with my voice but with my written words. Im still in high school about to be senior next year. I want everyone to see what i can do. I have a wonderful boyfriend who will support me in anything i do.)

The Best Poem Of Katherine Patrick

Kill You

I feel my blood run cold
No longer feel the heat of you
Everything we been through now im done
You walk away not even turning back
Hate courses through my veins
You leaving me here to die
I want crack your bones to hear your screams
Hear the sickening snap of every one of them
Cut your flesh away slowly to drag out your pain
Rip out your organs ruthlessly to hurt you
Do you still feel loved? Do you love the pain?
This what you did to me
Im watching you die in front of me
Your gasping for your last breath
You plead with your eyes to save you
But guess what i dont care anymore
I take a knife and stab your heart
Over and over again i stab you
Blood splashes on my face
Tears mingle with the blood
I ask one question...
Why did you leave me?

Katherine Patrick Comments

Shaun York 29 December 2013

I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.

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