Patrick Tolan

Rookie (Born 6th of August 1989 / Essex, England)

Patrick Tolan Poems

1. You 7/3/2006
2. Zest 7/4/2006
3. No Loss To Gain 7/4/2006
4. Ode To An Instrument 7/31/2006
5. Evil Lurks 7/31/2006
6. You Know When... 8/8/2006
7. Aiding Aids Across Africa 7/31/2006
8. Farewell 7/10/2006
9. Blind 7/9/2006
10. Lost 8/3/2006

Comments about Patrick Tolan

  • Ruby Root (7/31/2006 5:06:00 PM)

    Patrick I really enjoy your poetry. Your a fine young talented writer. Take care.

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Best Poem of Patrick Tolan

Aiding Aids Across Africa

Aiding AIDS across Africa
Your priests spreading lies
Just because condoms are evil in your eyes
No it is not agreeable to say they are permeable
Infecting desperate lives, like part of the virus itself
With false promises of a saviour, a shining light
All you are doing is increasing their plight
From something that maybe-might
To a hole from which they cannot dig out
“Burn the evil condoms! ! ” they hear you shout
Because you know they will do so without a doubt
Blindly, and without word or reason
Incinerating their real saviour, sealing their fate
Then ...

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