बर्बाद हर दिवाना Poem by Ajay Kumar Adarsh

Ajay Kumar Adarsh

Khagaria (Bihar) / INDIA

बर्बाद हर दिवाना

Rating: 5.0

ऐ दिल अब तुम छोड़ दे बीते यादो में जाना!
ना वो दिल तुम ना मुहब्बत ना वो अफसाना! !

ना जाने क्या रीति है ये, क्या है खेल पुराना!
दिलबर के हाथो ही हुआ बर्बाद हर दिवाना! !

ना कभी कोई मरहम मिलता ना कोई पैमाना!
ना भरे ना भुले कभी ये प्यार का जुर्माना! !

Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Partha Pratim Goswami 25 August 2016

A very touching poem.I can site about the analogy with a famous song by Lata Mangeshkar Iss jamane mein, iss mohabbat ne, kitne dil tore, kitne ghar tute- jane kyon log mohabbat karte hain, ahe bhar bharke diwane jiya karte hain

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 27 August 2016

I'm glad that you liked it.... yea..the song is very true..we can observe the things happened behind the love....thanks bro for your meaningful comment......

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SATISH CHANDRA YADAV 16 August 2016

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 23 August 2016

wah W g behad hi khubsurat sher......

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 August 2016

Hi Ajay, Nice poem. Love seems so enticing to a person in love. Aap pyaar ke doosra mukh dikhate heiN. LekiN, ishq ka saccha chehra suhani jo deekhta hain, ya aap jo dikhaate hein, inn donon mein kounsa hein? Kavi ne bataaya hein ki khoobsoorati dekhnewale ke aankhon mein hein. Waise hi ishq ke bhaav harr ek ko alag alag soojhte hein. kyonki, harr ek ka anubhav alag hein. Thank you for provoking my thouights! 10++

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 23 August 2016

thanks a lot for your marvelous comment Sir..you are quite this all(face of love...) depends upon experience. Which face we see or feel it is different for each n every THANKS.......Sir

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2016

Continue writing poems, you have thoughts the first need of a poet. Hope soon you will write wonderful poems.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 23 August 2016

thanks a lost sir for your supporting.............. the support is the things which can create the greatness in the world.....

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Tarun Yadav 07 August 2016

Bahut khoob

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 23 August 2016

thanks tarun

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