0022.Brutal Pain Poem by Sunset Moonshine

0022.Brutal Pain



Brutal Pain
It hurts
It makes you want to kill your self
Makes you think of suicide
And in general it just makes you think...

I hate it it makes me feel
empty and hollow
It's so bad
i find it hard to swallow

i need help
i really do
cause if i don't get it
i might go insane..
and maybe die....

none of this rymes but i don't care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 December 2008

Looking at this as a poet and outsider here...strong words...well written....

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