Thursday, February 27, 2014

070. The Widower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The slow turning fan sucks up
yesterday’s stale cigarette smoke
hanging like a mist
a solitary customer sits at the bar
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Jaden Knight
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Karen Sinclair 28 February 2014

Deeply profound. The cigarette smoke rising seems as though it resembles how life and loves just go... The machine tolling relentless feels a connection to the churchyard and the being ignored by the man accepting money from the lonely stranger a cruel truth. I found this so touching I really did Its a beautifully written piece to remind all couples where one day they may sit. Ty Ps I realise its probably an expressive piece mainly on the pain and solitude but there seems symbolism entwined.

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