117.A Journey Unbound Poem by rajagopal haran

117.A Journey Unbound

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A Journey Unbound


Among the stars
In the darkness of pregnant clouds
With air filling the space
And the cries of night birds mingling with the souls eternal
I start my moon journey
All alone unperturbed
Pleasant to a greater extent
Bitter negligibly
Certain Suns passing my way
Promising great light
And certain earths ready to swallow my shine
My lonely life that none can comprehend
Trying to find in the dictionary of life
The meaning of my words not found in you
Finding that pearl and losing the same in the great sigh
No reasoning is going to get into you
Though astronomical dawn has set in
Twilight is not visible anywhere in the horizon!


25 8 09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 27 August 2009

When we stand facing the light, shadow falls behind.....a positive write, when dawn sets in twilight retreats......pleasant read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 25 August 2009

nice visual extended metaphor: ''In the darkness of pregnant clouds With air filling the space And the cries of night birds mingling with the souls eternal'' wonderful poem................10+++

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Tiruchirapalli-Tamilnadu-India
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