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14 Shades Of Grey

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where do i belong
where do i fit
i feel like white sheep with black clothing
unwanted, distant from everybody else
like an angel with a broken wing
feeling that I have no connection with life

I wonder about a lot of things
why was I born?
they said that everyone has purpose in life
that it is in god's master plan,
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Laura Green 21 August 2007
Beautifully written and with such deep and well conveyed emotion. It conveys a sense of loss and confusion that everyone, especially people our age, can probably all relate. It's funny no matter how lost we find ourselves, all paths we take lead to the question of God. His most common way of answering, however, seems to be through the mouths of those who truly follow him. Lovely poem
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Blue Angel 17 August 2007
Yes, BRAVO is the perfect word for a comment to your Poem as posted by X Trane, the '14 Shades of Grey' are the questions we all face one day in life as for compassion can only exist as a result of pain, as for suffering is a teaching lesson for us on Earth and FAITH it is a grasp of HOPE and Wisdom as for the UNIVERSE'S SHAPE, around and around in circles we go, to find then out that all the answers are hidden inside our soul, as for we can't see, but we know we do exist beyond the body, as so GOD is within and without a BODY but EVERYWHERE and that is the BEAUTY of being ALIVE. Thanks for Sharing!
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X Trane 16 August 2007
Very good! I know the feeling! where you really born in 1989? if so, you are wiser than your years. Bravo! Maybe God talks to you when you write....
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