khalid alalawi

Rookie (1990 / oman)

21 - Poem by khalid alalawi

We are now away from each other
and We're getting farther, as We getting old

It's your 21 birthday
Your heart was like sky
Open for me in anytime

I used to be your 20 stars and now
Am nothing more than who I am
Lonely star, which has come up from the sky.

Some told me
Your heart is open for anyone
But it was closed front of me

I saw you in your 21 getting more shine
You shine like a star, but a soon I see
Your heart's talking about your past

In this year nothing I could wish
Nothing I could ask more, I wish to be,
With you forever.

This is your 21 so tell me
how would my look like


Comments about 21 by khalid alalawi

  • Unwritten Soul (2/16/2012 9:26:00 AM)


    That was a bright shine star...21 years of a newly born star...wish you become a megastar who never afraid in dark universe! ! nice write.._Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2011 5:21:00 AM)


    That's deep dude I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 21, 2012


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